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Thanks dino_dude!
As for the length I aimed it to be sorta like a Twilight Zone episode, not too long or short, but just right to keep you there. As for the grammer, it's not domething I really practice, but since I really like writing I will have to look into improving on that side more. But thanks again for reading!
At 11:34:38 AM on 12/26/2004, Dino_Dude said:
Hmm, I don't read many fan fics anymore, but your thread about Writer's Block encouraged me to check this out.
I must say, some great entertainment. It's just a nice length - not too long to keep me sitting here, and not too short to be uninteresting.
Only in a few segments did I question the grammer or style you had written something. For instance, some sentences ran into each other - which I guess to me just lacked commas. Yet it was only little things like that. Perhaps nitpicking on my part, but still, I thought was worth the mention.
Overall, I really enjoyed this. It probably helped that as of recently I've taken a great fondness to zombies stories and the like! As long as I remember, I'll be sure to come back to read your next instalment!
Good work!
At 11:52:49 PM on 12/25/2004, Troodontid said:
Hah! I commented first!
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