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means the user is online now! At 11:46:54 AM on 7/2/2004, TomCat17 said: Thanks spinodude11
At 11:07:31 AM on 7/2/2004, spinodude11 said: it was awesome dude
At 6:45:17 AM on 7/2/2004, TomCat17 said: I did portray Burnside differently from his school side on purpose and what improvments in grammer and descriptions should i make. this is my first story and any help would be good
At 4:50:03 AM on 7/2/2004, Raptor-Rex said: Don't bother finishing it, unless you make some big improvements. The way you portray Burnside originally, is very different from how you portray him in his journal. If that was your intention, then it's fine, but if it wasn't, rework it. You need to improve a lot in your grammar, and some more descriptions would be nice.
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