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I really enjoy the idea of Myers and Leatherface going at it- certainly something I'd rather see on the big screen instead of 'Freddy vs. Jason'.
I think your concept is good, so far, but your writing needs a bit more of an elaboration. Character development, descriptions, etc.
All in all, what you are providing here is a good outline of a story that could be pretty engaging if you spend more time on it.
A minor criticism would be your use of the word "bladed knife". I would think that a knife would be "bladed" all the time. Maybe if you just said knife, or butcher's knife, or go into slight detail of the knife's size (ex. a knife sporting a nine inch blade). I don't know, again, just minor stuff.
Anyways, like I said or didn't say, the idea of Myers and Leatherface going at each other interests me far more than 'Freddy vs Jason' or even 'Alien vs. Predator'.
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