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means the user is online now! At 6:59:07 AM on 11/7/2003, dark hunter said: Very cool. I could see what was happening in my head as i read. A very good thing and rare thing to see at Dans these days. The development of characters was excellent and personally i thought it moved a steady pace, not slow, not fast, just really nicely.
Rating:9/10
~Dark Hunter
At 8:00:54 PM on 11/3/2003, Aragorn said: This was pretty good. Slow-moving isn't always bad. lots of time its a great oppertunity for character devolopment. Its only whenthe movies/stories that are slow-moving, but don't put that slow-moving to good use, that its a bad thing. Anyway, thsi was fairly entertaining and I think I'm going to have to check out the second part.
At 6:01:42 PM on 11/3/2003, RaptorHiss said: Very interesting, I'm very curious to know the answers to the mysterys you've set up (set up quite well I might add)
Can't wait for the next one!
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