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means the user is online now! At 2:41:09 AM on 6/7/2003, dark hunter said: This is awesome, for once the whole mystery starts and we see what's going on.
This is excellent, the development is great, especially that of Rudolph and the King and I can't wait to read more.
Rating: 8.5/10
~Dark Hunter
At 3:22:43 PM on 6/1/2003, The Host said: Thanks, Junkee! Yeah, the beginning is the worst part to slog through but it's necessary. The novel bogs down at parts through the middle but I'm cutting more liberally there. The rest should be more tightly-plotted now that exposition is basically over.
-H
At 2:48:16 PM on 6/1/2003, JPJunkee said: Ahhh. . . . the plot thickens. Now, the story is becoming more enjoyable, as I believe more good things are soon to come.
I like the King character. He was entertaining to read. . . bloody hell, of course he is now poisoned, or whatever. . . bah!
I enjoyed this chapter more than the two past ones. And I am looking forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
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