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Thanks so much for the reviews, guys! I hope you continue to enjoy it. Next installment will be up shortly.
-H
At 7:33:24 AM on 5/29/2003, dark hunter said:
hey hey hey, another story from the Host, what have you got in your head this time? oh wait, you didn't write this book? you adapted it...
*interest draining, surprise draining, excitement gone*
Okay, let's start shall we, we'll see what it's about...wow, this is good. This is better than good, this is great!
*interest rising, surprise mounting, excitement taking over*
*****
Hoped you liked my little intro ;)
When i first saw the fan fic thing besides your name i went, oh yeah! another original fic! then i read that you were adapting it for "screen". Things went downhill. I waited a bit, got bored then made my way to the fan fic section and looked it up. I was shocked it was great!
For a screenplay format, you've managed to cram a lot of description and development into a nice little package for us to read. It's exciting, it's well described, it's smooth flowing, and best of all, it's good!
Rating: 7.8/10
~Dark Hunter
At 12:51:30 AM on 5/29/2003, yvonne said:
Very nice so far. RUDOLF RASSENDYLL is very likable and I do believe ... I've almost been talked into looking for this novel to read for myself. lol.
An excellent start, Host. Looking forward to more when you get to it! :)
At 11:30:59 PM on 5/28/2003, Parasaur.w said:
Enthrawling, well built, detailed. I loved it. As I said, I don't usually like script-forms, but this is really good stuff. The story is obviously well planned, and your effort shows. I can see some nice character developement with Robert and Rudolf, and with Rose there's more to come for her, I'm sure. The dialogue was very fitting, very smooth and light and frankly uplifting from the <i>NOOOOO!!s</i> and the <i>RUN!!!!s</i> of other fictions. Excellent. I can't wait for more.
...Pete
At 3:54:37 PM on 5/28/2003, tobycompy2.0 said:
IT was pretty well written... I don't completely LOVE the script format for a fan fiction... but yeah, pretty good story!
RATING: B
At 2:05:06 PM on 5/28/2003, The Host said:
Thanks, Junkee! You'll notice a big difference in the dialogue between this and Triumvirate. In Triumvirate I endeavored to write realistically; with Zenda I'm trying to write something more witty, poetic, suave, and fantastic. It will hopefully be more witty than realistic. We'll see how it goes.
-H
At 12:54:22 PM on 5/28/2003, JPJunkee said:
An interesting beginning. The fight was written very well, I could visualize it all very vividly. The dialogue was pretty good. And already I'm enjoying the characters. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
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