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Davies meets Dawson. . . it's actually quite the memorable scene. For some reason, the line that stands out the most for me, is when Dawson says, "Because I know what you’ve got in your left breast pocket." The reader sorta shares Davies' shock after Dawson says that.
What I have to say I enjoyed the most about this chapter though, was the commentary. I really liked how you described Dawson. You really know your characters, and it's obvious that you have put much thought into who and what they all are. Very nicely done.
-- JPJunkee
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