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means the user is online now! At 3:07:02 AM on 1/4/2003, RaptorHiss said: I can see this chapter was focused on the characterzationi and development of the plot.
You transfer very cleany from the action scenes to the "talking" scenes, bravo, Johnny, Bravo
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At 9:30:32 PM on 12/4/2002, JPJunkee said: Woah, sorry Host. I thought I had commented on installment three but I guess I skipped it. oops. . . .
Well anyway, I wanted to say that this was a very good installment. Good scene with Dawson and Davies. Keep it up!
-- JPJunkee
At 1:50:51 AM on 12/1/2002, dark hunter said: Hey, once again very nice chapter, this i think is one of the best yet. Copley is a great character and you can already see the development of him starting and davies is just amazingingly written.
this story is fantastic
Rating: 9/10
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