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means the user is online now! At 4:58:26 AM on 3/12/2003, dark hunter said: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! it ended with a cliffhanger, well this chapter did.
I really must say the action for this story is intense, wlel written, amazing executed and just plain amazing. The dialogue is crisp and very well written and basically perfect. The characters are fantastic and let's just say, Copley, bad guy, yet good in the fact he left the CEO, what a surprise!!!
9.7/10
AMAZING!
~Dark Hunter
At 1:29:22 AM on 1/4/2003, JPJunkee said: AWESOME!
Host, you are the man when it comes to writing action! Shoot em up! Shoot em up! Pow Pow!
sorry
I liked how Copley just left the CEO like that. the CEO deserves nothing better! And I'm really liking this Cabbie guy, he's funny and cool. Good combo!
I must read the END NOWWWW!!!!
. . . . but I don't want it to end. . . .
-- JPJunkee
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