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means the user is online now! At 3:03:45 AM on 12/20/2002, dark hunter said: Absolutely amazing stuff man.
literally incredible.
The detail in which each of the scenes is written is is superb, you can see everything that happens.
the moving backwards and forwards between the president, the battle, copley and dawson was fantastic, allowing a glimpse of each before returning to the other, this keeps us on out feet and thus allows us to not get disturbed by the changes happening.
I salute the author of the best non-JP fic on the board
Rating: 9.5/10
~Dark Hunter
At 10:24:35 AM on 12/18/2002, JPJunkee said: Incredible!
I liked how so much was happening at once, there was the speach, Copley, Dawson, and the battle. And it was all done so well!
And the action was written extremely well. The ending of this installment was a real cliff hanger, I can't wait to read the next one.
Great job once again, Host. I applaud you.
-- JPJunkee
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