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*starts to cry*
i cannot wait a few days i need my Triumvirate rush now!!!
but while im waiting here is this postings review:
You are an excellent writer, the plot has yet again twisted again, if you hadn't written a main character dies at underneath your topic thingy-ma-bob i would have been speechless when the president was just suddenly killed.
The motives of Dawson however still seem clouded, i am confused about who the real bad guy is...
Davies is too trusting, that is his character i guess but still he is way too trusting. I love it how much detail you put into his character alone, not to mention all the others, Davies alone is possibly the best character to come out of a fan fic at Dans.
The dialogue is amazing, the plot is incredible, the story is special, the characters astounding, the whole thing is just utterly spine-tingeling unbelievable.
Rating: 9.8/10
At 1:07:33 AM on 12/27/2002, JPJunkee said:
Wow, the President's dead. BOOM! Well, he kinda deserved it, so he gets no tears from me. Ha!
Excellent writing, Host. Some truly wonderful dialogue.
I have something to say, that I've been meaning to say on other comments, but it never came to mind at the right time. I personally think that you should have given the CEO a name. It's kinda odd that he's the main villain (from a certain point of view)and he doesn't even have a name to go by. Just my two cents.
Still, a great story, and I look forward to reading the conclusion.
-- JPJunkee
At 1:49:26 AM on 12/26/2002, Vader said:
Excellent scripting, great dialogue. I haven't had the oppertunity to read this entire story, but I intend to go back and read previous installments.
Once again, wonderful work.
At 1:49:25 AM on 12/26/2002, Vader said:
Excellent scripting, great dialogue. I haven't had the oppertunity to read this entire story, but I intend to go back and read previous installments.
Once again, wonderful work.
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