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means the user is online now! At 5:22:43 PM on 8/30/2004, The_Shniz said: Meant to comment when it was released but I didn't know what to say... still don't know what to say.
I haven't much constructive criticism to offer (English and Writing weren't my strongest subjects).
So far this is my least favorite chapter (mostly due to flashbacks and voice overs, the contents not bad though). I think this would work better as a visual... and hopefully I'll bring it that far.
Anyways, keep 'em coming.
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