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means the user is online now! At 7:54:30 AM on 9/27/2005, MartinRandle said: Lovely writing though the flow is a little disjointed at times. No worse than I have read in published books though, just something that could be sweetened up.
At 9:14:24 PM on 8/14/2005, RezSez said: Once again, your short story impresses me. Even better than How We got to Where We are, or whatever the hell the name of it was. It feels like a college version of Amy Hempel(At the Gates of the Animal Kingdom). Talented, yes, but for every bit of talent and memorable wording you have an educational slump of writing that needs to be shaken. It takes time, but have no fear. Reminding me again of my favourite writers, clever little bastard.
At 1:19:50 PM on 8/13/2005, raptorhunter22 said: Really fucking great. The only thing that I would change, is the amount of questions you ask the reader. It kind of drains the flow that you had going.
Otherwise, absolutely fucking fantastic.
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