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Well, that was a very good read, Matt (or Host, if you prefer). I really enjoyed it. It's always interesting to delve into the inner thoughts and emotions of someone, through their own written words. . . there's just something about it, that I find . . . mesmerizing. Really though, this was some great stuff. I don't have much to comment on, because well, it was rather short, and there's not much to comment on, other than your talent in writing. But, I look forward to more. :)
-- JPJunkee
At 11:05:22 AM on 3/27/2003, yvonne said:
This was a very moving beginning to what I hope to read a lot more of. Nicely detailed and worded very well. You are very good at writing, Host (I'll call you Matt if that's okay later ... lol)
There was one small error in one of the last sentences, where a word needs to be added ...
"Laura asked me to stay, but I told her had to pack"
No biggie though. I do a lot worse in my own writings. :)
You are a very impressive writer. I want more!
At 4:59:42 AM on 3/27/2003, dark hunter said:
depresingly honest, but such is life, brutally honest and very well written, Matt, it seems you have started a new story that will grip it's readers, i enjoyed immensly, not just because of the reasons posted, but also because it kinda rminds me of well me. Please post another part soon.
~Dark Hunter
At 2:17:02 AM on 3/27/2003, caffeinejunkie said:
I like it so far... perhaps mainly because it's reassurance that even the greatest of 'Tragedies' will eventually fade, and life does go on. Anyway, it's entertaining and honest. Very well written.
Alas, due to lack of sleep, I have no real constructive critisism to give.
I look forward to reading more. =)
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