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Excellent writing Host, very nicely done, love the description and dialogue, it's beautifully done.
~Dark Hunter
At 1:09:40 AM on 3/31/2003, yvonne said:
You are so witty with your writing, Host. I love it. I really do! :)
Just from reading what little I have about the girl in question ... Laura ... she has really been a lot of trouble for you. lol. If I were you, I'd try to find someone who seems more interested in you. She doesn't seem interested in anything more than friendship.
I got slightly confused with how you represented time. Maybe adding dates, or just months and years, would help some, but that's probably just me, so don't worry about it. I'll cope. lol.
:)
At 1:26:00 PM on 3/29/2003, JPJunkee said:
Good stuff, yet again. I like the way you described your connections with your friends, the Two Guys. I really like your writing. It's quite excellent, really.
'I should've been a pair of ragged claws!' , heh, I think it's cool how you added that in there. . . or perhaps it was here to begin with, and the poem came second. Either way, cool.
I look forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
At 8:22:25 PM on 3/28/2003, Vader said:
Just read the first two installments. Great stuff, I can relate to a lot of what you're thinking, he he. :)
At 8:22:24 PM on 3/28/2003, Vader said:
Just read the first two installments. Great stuff, I can relate to a lot of what you're thinking, he he. :)
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