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unlike these two below me, i enjoyed your story at all times, i found it intriguing and funny and cleverly written, it is a blessing to read such wonderful work, Host keep it up. Or Else. Or else what you say, i'll think of something.
~Dark Hunter
At 2:59:18 AM on 4/4/2003, yvonne said:
JPJunkee* (sorry Junkee) :/
At 2:58:36 AM on 4/4/2003, yvonne said:
Like JPJunkke said, the writing is exceptional.
The very beginning of this chapter was somewhat slow, losing my interest a little bit. But once the buses left, it was very good. I'm not sure who most of these people are that you're talking about, but I like most of them. Grover is hilarious.
:)
At 12:36:28 AM on 4/4/2003, JPJunkee said:
Edit to previous comment: *but the story just doesn't hold my interest at all times*
At 12:34:59 AM on 4/4/2003, JPJunkee said:
Once again good writing, Host. It's all very crisp and clear. The story is getting better. It's still not really grabbing me though. I mean, the writing is exceptional, but the story just at all times. Still, I look forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
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