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Well written, what else can I say. I must admit I like your combination of elements of the book and the movie, especially the being delayed in Costa Rica element.
On another note, being an Alan Grant/Ellie Sattler fan I was rather disappointed that the canon decided not to pair them together in JPIII. I'm glad your fic goes a different track...
At 8:44:27 PM on 8/16/2004, Texasraptor said:
Thanks for the excellent review. The "five miles" saying is a favorite of mine.
Thanks again for reading!
At 2:00:25 AM on 8/12/2004, Teach said:
Another well-written installment! You have a great deal of talent, and I like your style. You're obviously no stranger to the language, which is a big bonus in my book! Very well done.
Some things that stood out:
**On the helicopter, she had repeated that to herself, like a mantra.**
I don't know why--I lack the capacity to sort it out at the moment--but this one particular line struck me as...very good. A nice touch.
Another nice touch was:
**I look like five miles of bad road, Alan thought**
A humorous interior monologue never hurts, and that expression seems right coming from Grant.
You've captured the characters well, also, and I look forward to learning a little more about the new character, Reiling.
Looking forward to the next!
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