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Very humourous chapter:) Nice character development going on here. Tis a good one.
At 5:52:23 PM on 9/9/2004, broman said:
Very exciting indeed. Good job.
At 5:01:12 AM on 9/9/2004, MartinRandle said:
Yayyy! I was driving to work this very morning wondering what had happened to this story.
I was going to log on and demand an episode! :-)
And lo and behold here it is in it's magnificent glory!
Way too short I was hoping it would entertain me until coffee break - but I guess it was quality over quantitiy.
And what quality! You write like a pro. I never once get the feeling this is "fan fic" the language is mature and the characters strong and considered. The story is enchanting and I do love an adventure where a Dragon is the foe.
It has the feel of a long lost Tolkien novel. Though the style is more naturalistic. I do love the language and terminology you introduce that seperates their world from ours yet still allows us to understand and associate with them and their folklore.
Now I'm off to get a Coney sandwich with Staggerberrywine! And if my teeth should rot in my head, then I shall leave their demise to the Tooth-Pixies.
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