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means the user is online now! At 8:19:16 AM on 1/26/2004, Stryderman said: Okay.
Thanks for the help, mate. You know what? You're probably right. I wrote this when i was like 11. I knew nothing about pacing.
Thanks again. Ill stop by right ......... now.
At 10:53:05 PM on 1/25/2004, Troodontid said: Hey Stryder! Its me! Well its my turn to review...
This was a really nice edition to your story BUT it was a tad too short and action seemed fast-paced, a little too fast-paced. The cliffhanger you left off at I think wasn't the appropriate one. I don't know why I just don't feel it. Maybe I would have liked to see Dodgson retain consciousness for a little while longer or something. Other than my jibberish it was GREAT (short thought).
PS. Stop by my thread to take a look I've podted something in response to you and Martin's comments!
LAM
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