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Yep, this is still good!
At 4:45:38 AM on 1/23/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Hey what chapter is this ... it must be Preparations. yeah, well, like to see YOU do a better job *sniff*
nah, stuff that. i dont like writing boring talky bits, i like writing action scenes.
At 9:55:59 PM on 1/22/2003, Vito_The_White said:
Very interesting part man. Sorry it took me so long to read this. I didn't know it was here. lol. It did seem ok, but you did vary away from the original greatness of the story. I can't explain it, but it doesn't seem the same.
At 3:34:28 PM on 1/22/2003, yvonne said:
I don't think this was written quite as well as the previous parts. Somewhere in the middle, it was very sketchy .. or something.
But it was still enjoyable. You've managed to get my attention, so I'll read on. :)
At 11:47:46 PM on 1/20/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Thanks. As the film (oops, i mean story) progresses, there is less dialogue ... and a lot more of something else. Begins with run and ends in ning. Can you guess what it is?
At 11:36:07 PM on 1/20/2003, Vader said:
Nice writing, particularly in the dialogue. Keep it up. :)
At 10:35:40 PM on 1/20/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Lol, and fall apart they inevitably will ... otherwise, hey, itd be pretty boring. Thanks for the positives, drucifer67
At 11:56:35 AM on 1/20/2003, drucifer67 said:
So it starts...all over again! Can't wait to see these carefully-laid plans start falling apart...
I think my favorite part of this one, out of everything, is your description of Norman the Fence Guy. I can see him, with his "cheesy comb-over"...good stuff.
Keep it coming!
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