|
[ Log In ] [ Register ]
means the user is online now! At 8:32:21 PM on 9/26/2003, paleeoguy said: Hey, this is good!
At 11:58:53 PM on 1/20/2003, Strider_Aragorn said: 'More' is going to be posted by Thursday ... check out chapter 2 while youre here.
At 11:54:13 PM on 1/20/2003, JPJunkee said: Interesting. I found this to be an enjoyable read. I'll check out more, when more is posted.
-- JPJunkee
At 2:56:57 AM on 1/20/2003, Strider_Aragorn said: No he's more mature after JP3, because Part II takes place on the islands, in the near future ... All will become clear in a few months.
At 3:53:57 PM on 1/19/2003, Vito_The_White said: Billy Brennan? Why would anyone want to have that idiot return in a story. I'd understand Roland Tembo, because he's cool, but why Billy? He's useless. Plus he'd be a kid during the time that this story takes place... However, if he's a kid, maybe he wouldn't be so annoying and stupid.
At 5:36:02 AM on 1/19/2003, Strider_Aragorn said: Thanks Vito, but this is based on the movies. That's why Billy Brennan is returning with Roland Tembo and -- oops ...
At 11:47:31 AM on 1/18/2003, Vito_The_White said: Well, that was a bit better then the prologue. It does seem interesting to consider this as what might have happened right after the incident at Isla Nublar. I am interested to know what happens now. Just remember this one point, Dodgson isn't the owner of Biosyn. Jeff Rossiter is. Unless you're not going to keep to Crichton's work, then it's ok. Just thought I'd tell ya though. Nice job.
At 9:25:19 PM on 1/17/2003, Strider_Aragorn said: cool, its an honour to be praised by you guys ... the next chapter (which i think is called "Preperations"--it's all happening really fast) will be up by monday. Thanks guys! btw, yvonne, i read the alternate ending for jp3, and it rules!
At 12:29:21 PM on 1/17/2003, yvonne said: Now there's some scientific stuff to go with the story. Plus, it's kind of nice to see what might have happened right after Jurassic Park .... with Dodgson getting the embryos that he paid for. It's a good idea so far. :)
At 12:29:17 PM on 1/17/2003, drucifer67 said: Another good chapter...things are unfolding at a reasonable pace and the descriptive passages are nice in their detailing. But the part that matters most is, you left me wondering what's going to happen next--so I'll be watching for the next installment! Keep it up!
Sorry, you must be logged in to post a comment
|
|
Add DJP3P to your newsreader!
|