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means the user is online now! At 11:14:30 AM on 5/7/2003, JPJunkee said: The action, while original and fast paced, was kind of jerky in this chapter. It didn't flow well, and some characters were ignored for too long of a time. And there were more than a few sentences that were very oddly worded, and should probably be edited. But, overall, it was a good chapter. An original way to have them crash on the island.
-- JPJunkee
At 1:45:26 AM on 2/8/2003, Strider_Aragorn said: Thanks, I tried to keep it complicated ... but, for me, that's complicated! More positives! Thanks everyone! hmmm ...
At 2:37:56 AM on 2/6/2003, drucifer67 said:
Ah...our old pal Dodgson is now in deep, deep shit...and I like how you put him there...an interesting way to create a crash landing! Again, your descriptions are quite vivid and easy to follow. I like where this seems to be going...I'm on my way to read more!
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