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cool Spinoboy11, great work, funny as Rancor LOL
~Dark Hunter
At 8:42:58 PM on 5/4/2002, Dac said:
Yes, yes, yes, this is good
So I'm the impatient one, eh? Cool
At 7:30:44 PM on 5/4/2002, Spinoboy11 said:
Tonight.
Pete:Yeah, you're coming soon.
<I>-Spinoboy11</I>
<I>-Night Vision & Domestic Signature Designer</I>
At 2:52:47 PM on 5/4/2002, The Crow said:
very very good. as what Pete said, good character intros. When are you going to realease the next chapters?
At 2:45:17 PM on 5/4/2002, Parasaur.w said:
<font color=orange><i><center>Pete's Mini Reviews</i>
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<font color=gray>Very short. If it were me, I'd make these chapters longer. It held my interest but was cut short, leaving me feeling like I didn't get my moneys worth (it's an expression...). Good character introductions. The scenes and dialogue flowed more fluently this time. I enjoyed this story, so far it is entertaining, despite it's length.
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7.5 of 10</font></center>
Side note: In a trailer, I read a scene involving moi. Do I feature? I hope so, cause this is a cool story! ;)
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