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means the user is online now! At 2:47:40 PM on 5/4/2002, Jurassic_Justin said: I love it! I am sure The Crow will like it too. Pretty damn sweet!
At 2:37:13 PM on 5/4/2002, Parasaur.w said: <font color=orange><i><center>Pete's Mini Reviews</i> ****************************</font> <font color=gray>Interesting story. Not much action, but that is to be expected for a first chapter. I like the mystery involved toward the end. The scenes are a bit jerky, they don't flow together very well. The dialogue a it shaky, but its nothing that bad. I noticed a couple of grammatical errors. All in all, not bad.
*********** 7.4 of 10</font></center>
At 10:28:23 AM on 5/4/2002, TyrannoRex112 said: Cool!
At 6:39:54 AM on 5/4/2002, Dac said: Oh, yeah, now that is good! What chapter do I turn up in?
At 5:29:42 AM on 5/4/2002, dark hunter said: That was pretty cool, intriguing, got me very interested, oops, i started the whole thing, heh, heh.
kept my mind fixed on the story, very well done, i like a lot.
~Dark Hunter
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