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means the user is online now! At 3:40:08 AM on 11/29/2009, Raptor Vinny said: Wow, this is actually really good writing. Proof that your other shit was intentionally bad.
At 4:28:49 PM on 12/7/2003, Aragorn said: Go jump off a bridge. It'll be easier for you to do then to continue writing this utter garbage.
At 5:50:18 AM on 12/4/2003, Dac said: Bad, bad, bad. Just stop. Poor grammar, too short, extremely corny ending, beginning and middle...I could go on
At 12:32:32 AM on 12/3/2003, General Rancor said: I vonder, if I figure out vat goes on in that mind of yours, vill I get a Nobel Prize or be committed to a mental institution?
At 9:56:33 PM on 12/2/2003, Carnotaur3 said: Surprisingly not bad. But I didn't understand some of the diologue. Keep at it man, you'll improve more.
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