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At 10:14:32 AM on 6/22/2002, firebird said:
OMG, THIS SUCKS MORE THAN ANYTHING!
At 10:13:22 AM on 6/21/2002, tobycompy2.0 said:
<font color=Brick red>Hey, guys we don't have to be such big assholes. I was kind of like that at the beginning. But obviously we were all drawn to the 2nd sequel to this fan fiction, okay sure the entire story is messed up. It is much too rushed, and the evolution is kind of crazy, but at the same time its quite creative. I mean, yeah, it doesn't have an explanation for completely different dinosaurs evolving into completely other dinosaurs, and there is about 20 other flaws about this portraying of evolution, but don't bag on him so horribly, you guys.
Brad, I think its cool you didn't just say: SUCKS! SUCKS CRAP!
And Spino144, next year at school, I recommend getting some tips from your english teacher, and also read alot this Summer, I'm not lately, but you should, with this writing.
Study things like that and how books should be written, and also next time make your stories MUCH longer. Like explain how suddenly Alan Grant got on Isla Sorna.
This is a fun fan fic, though because its so hilariously zany. So I guess I can give it:
5/10 for effort, I think.</font>
<font color=Brick red>
-What you just witnessed was the bite of the compy. Goodnight.</font>
<font color=Silver>The Timeline of the Gun - July 4 Draws Nearer</font>
At 8:51:57 AM on 6/21/2002, Brad said:
While it is obvious that your entire knowledge of evolution was taken from an episode of Digimon, this isn't a bad story. I think your dialogue is okay, and I sort of understand the plot now. Creative.
At 2:58:24 AM on 6/21/2002, KillerRaptor said:
SUCKS CRAP!
At 12:09:52 AM on 6/21/2002, General Rancor said:
<font color=red>HAHAHA WTF!?</font>
At 12:08:06 AM on 6/21/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Spino144
Dont <i>EVER</i> click on the "Fan Fiction" button again
At 12:04:16 AM on 6/21/2002, Seth Rex 2 said:
SUCKS!
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