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A lot of work needs to be done on your grammar. A LOT. It will make your stories a lot better.
At 2:34:36 PM on 7/4/2002, Spider Carnage said:
Thanks guys I'll try to fix my grammer but thanks for the comments!
<img src=http://www.boomspeed.com/icebox/scarlet.jpg><font color=Blue>Spider Carnage: The REAL Scarlet Spider.<font color=Purple>Now playing! The sequel to <i>”The Scarlet Spider</i>:<i>”Venom Returns!”</i>
At 9:39:40 AM on 7/4/2002, Symbiote Spider said:
Pretty good. Some spelling and Grammer errors. But ok overall.
At 12:11:59 AM on 7/4/2002, Raptor-Rex said:
</font><font color=green> It's okay except for the grammatical errors. What's the deal with that? You seem to write better when you just post stuff on the board, and then when you write your fan-fics, your spelling and stuff can be horrible at times. Still a fairly good story...
The dash in my name is a mark of intelligence and authenticity.
Raptor-Rex
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At 11:15:41 PM on 7/3/2002, Spider Carnage said:
Yes I am westfilm I changed my name because someone was impersonating me. Yes I am Scarlet Spider and was the one who wrote it too. I thought I wasn't going to get a good comment. Thanks for the encouragement!
<img src=http://www.boomspeed.com/icebox/scarlet.jpg><font color=Blue>Spider Carnage: The REAL Scarlet Spider.<font color=Purple>Now playing! The sequel to <i>”The Scarlet Spider</i>:<i>”Venom Returns!”</i>
At 11:10:20 PM on 7/3/2002, westfilm said:
Good job. One question, were you the one who the "The Scarlet Spider"? Anyway, that's actually really good for a 13 year old. Keep working at it and you'll be fantastic.
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