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means the user is online now! At 11:05:33 PM on 4/24/2003, JPJunkee said: I, for one, liked this chapter a lot. It explained many things, and it explained them very well. Many things, that were once confusing, now make more sense. . . to a certain extent.
The dialogue of Lucifer is good. In a way, it's exactly what I'd think it would be. However, Marks' dialogue seems a bit. . . forced or corny at times. But, for the most part, it's good.
A nicely done chapter, overall. I look forward to more. :)
-- Dr. Junkee
At 10:07:38 PM on 4/23/2003, dark hunter said: Very nice, though i see what you mean by not the best chapter, none-the-less i thought it was really good.
It was a good way of explaining things, you explained why lucifer didn't explain things properly before very well.
I am enjoying this story a lot, keep it up.
Rating:7.5/10
~Dark Hunter
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