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means the user is online now! At 2:36:29 PM on 5/7/2003, yvonne said: I hate when I'm walking down the street and demons come out of cracks and draw their swords at me! hehe.
This was very well written. I loved it. This is shaping into a very nice story. Like the others mentioned, the details are very well done. :)
At 12:07:12 AM on 4/24/2003, JPJunkee said: As a writer, you sure as hell know how to grab the reader's attention. This whole thing is very interesting (and weird too). It all flows so nicely, partly because of the fine pace of the story, the detailed descriptions. . . and also just because it's all so different. The idea of an invisible crowd was a very cool thing. . .
I'm really enjoying this story.
-- JPJunkee
At 2:56:12 AM on 4/19/2003, dark hunter said: Very intriguing. This story is well done because of its mysterious nature, it's difficult to determine what's real and what's dreams, im enjoying it more as i continue reading. Your descriptions are very well done.
Rating:8.5/10
~Dark Hunter
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