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Wow...yet another chapter down and my interested has yet to shed a bit... a true sign of a creatively great writer, youve got my interest intact, not an easy task! Now that the dream seems to have moved out into the "real world" it makes it even more odd and interesting seeing how other people are reacting to a living dream...
Excellent!
~"Think you good 'nough da take on Gambit?" ~ Gambit
At 3:00:25 AM on 4/23/2003, yvonne said:
Well, I read a little more. :)
This was very good! You are weaving a nice little story here, placing just enough confusion to make the reader want to know what the hell is going on. So good job! :)
The basketball team seeing the door open and the glass smash ... and then seeing it suddenly back intact, was very unusual indeed.
I'm really looking forward to having some extra free time to read more of this. :)
At 11:54:01 PM on 4/22/2003, JPJunkee said:
Ooooo. . . . the plot thickens. Now it is no longer just dreams and stuff. . . now doors are opening on their own. . . and glass is acting all weird and crap!
This is an odd story, to say the least (but, I love odd stuff).
I am really enjoying it.
-- JPJunkee
At 2:45:38 AM on 4/19/2003, dark hunter said:
Nice.
Bit confusing but nicely done, the whole dream thing was good and the doors bashing open was really spooky. This is a cool story.
Rating: 8.5/10
~Dark Hunter
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