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TO be honest, I liked the end of this chapter (new dream) just as much/if not more, than the opening scene...I'm definitly gonna be moving on to read more...very, very interesting at this point...
One of the things keeping me DEEPLY interested at this point is wanting to know why heaven is waging war on humanity at the same time as hell is upon it...and WTF is with Mark LOL...
Great!
"Dealer Wins; Not Your Day"~ Gambit
At 2:52:59 AM on 4/23/2003, yvonne said:
Well, I didn't find this part quite as easy to read as part 1, but it was still very good. It picked up near the end, with the Justine dream. This guy Mark has some serious problems developing inside.
I'll read more when I get the chance. :)
p.s. What an odd way to spell Justin. :)
At 11:47:47 PM on 4/22/2003, JPJunkee said:
This story is turning out to be quite the pleasent surprise. A fine story is brewing, I can sense it. hehe
Really though, I did enjoy this a lot. It was pretty cool, and the whole thing with the multiple dreams is interesting. And the idea of a war between heaven, hell, and humanity. . . is cool, but yet freaky. :)
The emotions and dialogue are also written well.
Very good work, Snake-Mark.
I'm moving on to more!
-- JPJunkee
At 2:42:29 AM on 4/19/2003, dark hunter said:
Wow, very cool, i enjoyed that immensly, especially the whole description of Marks demonic powers type things.
Very well done.
Rating: 8/10
~Dark Hunter
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