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Very well written & interesting...
I loev the opening battle scene (of course), and I love the end of the chapter with the discovery of the cuts, it was a great way to end and live yvonne said, get people wanting to read more...and being that I am a HUGE fan of stuff like Blade & Devil May Cry (1 & 2) and shit like that, this story just happens to be right up my alley...I'll be moving on to Chp2 shortly... great work!
~"Losin aint my style" ~ Gambit
At 11:37:12 AM on 4/21/2003, JPJunkee said:
Very interesting.
I liked the fight scene. It was well written and flowed very well. Like Dino_Dude said, it was eloquent.
Also the stuff including Mark is intriguing.
You've caught my interest, I'll be sure to read more when more time becomes available to me.
-- JPJunkee
At 11:19:38 AM on 4/21/2003, yvonne said:
Mark, you're a very good storyteller, my friend!
Right away, you grabbed my curiousity and didn't let it go at all. The cuts on his back were a very good way to end the first part. Makes the reader want to know more.
And that's what I'm doing right now. Moving on the Part 2. :)
P.S. Leaving a teenager alone for 2 weeks ... are his parents nuts!?? hehe
At 10:34:23 AM on 4/19/2003, Dino_Dude said:
Having just played Devil may Cry 2 for the first time, I found myself intrigued at the idea of you writing a story based on the concept.
This was quite good, the dream sequence at the beginning was very well done, written in an <i>elegant way</i>, shall we say.
I'll be checking out more of this for sure. :)
Cheers,
~Dino_Dude~
At 8:51:23 AM on 4/18/2003, dark hunter said:
Not bad.
Loved the fight scene at the start it was very well done, though it being a dream (or was it?) was a bit of a let down.
The gashes down Mark's back was a bit of a shock, very interesting indeed.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Rating: 7/10
( i would rate higher but thats all ive read so far, not much action or development as of yet).
~Dark Hunter
PS could Mark be you? subtly placed in the story??
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