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means the user is online now! At 3:39:09 PM on 5/25/2004, JPJunkee said: Holy cliffhanger, Batman.
Cool stuff, Mark, it's good to be reading this story again. It's been a long time now since I read the previous chapter, but even so, I remember all the characters and what they're doing. I liked Mark in this chapter. I remember him getting a little bit stale, perhaps a little too cold or something, but in this chapter I thought he was cool. Overall a good chapter, lots of moments where I'm being left hanging as to what comes next, and that makes me want to read the next chapter all that much more.
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