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means the user is online now! At 10:14:16 PM on 1/19/2004, JPJunkee said: Very cool chapter, Mark. Much better than the chapter previous, and it's not just because of the action and blood splatter. This was just written better, I think. I like the way Denis was running with the demons in front and the angels behind, and then jumped at the last moment, leaving the two groups to fight with each other. It was a smart move on his part, as opposed to always having to blast the hell out of everything with his guns. I'm curious as to what trouble may lay in story for the good guys as the angels will now be following Denis. Oooo. Good chapter, Mark, nice action and nice pacing. :)
- Kyle
At 1:46:29 AM on 1/18/2004, paleeoguy said: Nice, very very nice, Mark. I want to read the next chapter (28?)!
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