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means the user is online now! At 2:37:40 PM on 1/14/2004, JPJunkee said: Nice action! An all around good chapter, really quite enjoyable. All the hybrids have their own duties now, splitting up and heading off into different directions, which should make any other action scenes with them more suspenseful. Do I detect a bond developing between Mark and Alyssa? Hmmm. And he was mad Andria and Jon hooked up! . . . Or maybe I'm seeing things? Hehe. And the fight with the hellhounds and the super shotgun was nifty! As was Mark's duel with Andarial. Just an all around cool chapter. Nice job! :)
One question remains however. . . . Who the hell is Mark LoProto and what has he done with Mr. Laurence?! ;)
- Kyle
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