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Right. . . I meant to say MDD not MMD!
At 4:19:17 PM on 1/10/2004, JPJunkee said:
MMD is back!
And there was much rejoicing.
Yay!
. . . . Right then!
Good chapter, Mark! My favorite part was when Alyssa put the shotgun to Mr. Dennington's gut. Oh, I wanted innards to fly! Innards, Mark! Innards!. . . . But oh well, hopefully Dennington's innards will fly soon enough! . . . The little line of Mark's when he saw Jon and Andria together was nice, too. Nice little touch on the characters there, and I'm anxious to find out how that will turn out later in the story. There was one thing I felt was touched on a little too much though. It was the fact that Dennis (and the other hybrids) didn't make a sound while walking on the floor. I understood it the first time, the hybrids are very light-footed and quiet when they want to be or whatever, but I was reminded of it at least two more times. Just a little hiccup there. But really, good chapter overall. And it's very nice to read a new chapter in the story again. And with the Devil sending out his legions and the Commanders or whatever, it should only get better and all the more hellish (ha! Hellish!) from here.
Looking forward to more! :)
- Kyle
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