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means the user is online now! At 12:22:38 AM on 7/8/2003, dark hunter said: I'll repost a new review seeing as now chapter 14 is back and my review for this chapter is gone.
It was very well done, the development of the kids is great and the introduction of Denis was good, the bit with Denis fighting himself in front of the alter was excellent.
You've put forth a very nice story, let it continue to be so.
Rating: 8/10
~Dark Hunter
At 11:44:10 AM on 7/7/2003, dark hunter said: Okay whats happened? Chapter 14 and 15 are exactly the same!
Please explain.
If you want my review for this chapter see chapter 14...
~Dark Hunter
At 1:28:20 AM on 7/2/2003, JPJunkee said: Pretty good. This chapter didn't have a lot with Mark, and really, I actually appreciate that fact. It gives the reader a better chance to find out about the other characters. Anyway, I liked this chapter. The talks about the dreams was cool. I look forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
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