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means the user is online now! At 11:29:16 AM on 7/7/2003, dark hunter said: The action here was superb. Brilliantly written i could see the scene unfolding in my head. It was a classic fight scene and the way the other students reacted was perfect.
Not much more tobe said...
Rating: 9/10
~Dark Hunter
At 12:52:34 AM on 5/21/2003, JPJunkee said: Probably one of the best chapters yet. The action was well written, and flowed very well. I liked it a lot. I'm really enjoying this story. Keep it up!
-- JPJunkee
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