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very nice, a great addition as it flowed extremely well.
The characters act like real people would and seem to be real. You manage to get their emotions across to the audience extremely well, thereby enabling us to have a deeper affinity with them.
Very good. I enjoyed it immensly.
Oh and how many people does Mark knowthat are demon/angel???
Rating: 8.5/10
~Dark Hunter
At 12:22:07 AM on 5/17/2003, JPJunkee said:
Hmm. . . I really don't have much to say this time. It was a good chapter. The emotions and dialogue was written well. And the characters are quite enjoyable, and all have their own special aura to them. There were a few grammar errors, and it was actually pretty confusing at times (but, I'm sure much will be explained soon), but overall, it was a very fine chapter.
Looking forward to more! :)
-- JPJunkee
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