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means the user is online now! At 11:00:15 AM on 7/7/2003, dark hunter said: Wow.
The first real twist. Hapton was actually a demon! Very nice.
A goodtwist that was unexpected and very well written.
The description was flawless and i could see everything that was happening very easily.
This was a very enjoyable chapter.
Rating: 9/10
~Dark Hunter
At 11:41:24 PM on 5/13/2003, JPJunkee said: Hmm. . . so Hampton wasn't just a bully, instead he was some weird demon creature like thing. . . or something. Anyway, interesting.
This chapter was written well, and everything was easy to visualize.
There is one comment I've been meaning to make for some time now. . . and it's kinda late to say it now but. . . . the chapters are a little short. Lots of stuff happen in the chapters, but I think they could be longer, or something.
Anyway, nice work. And I look forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
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