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means the user is online now! At 7:54:34 PM on 9/10/2004, yvonne said: I think Van Helsing is such a tortured hero, and you capture that very well, Mark.
I like where this story is going, so I'll read more very soon. :)
At 1:45:36 PM on 9/5/2004, CeratosPit said: I like how you brought in Lawrence Talbot as the Wolf Man. Never much cared for Velkan Valerious... :p
At 11:43:51 PM on 9/3/2004, Aragorn said: I enjoyed the first part, but I enjoyed this part far more (Probably has something to do with werewolves being my fancy, lol). Can't wait to read Part 3.
Some suggestions though:
"Nobodies seen anythin’ like this.”
I believe that's supposed to be spelled "Nobody's"
“We figger its one of them rich crazies,"
I believe that's supposed to be spelled 'Figure' but I could be wrong.
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