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means the user is online now! At 10:19:21 PM on 4/28/2004, JPfan4life said: well, it may not be the best writing in the world, I still love a simple, Jurassic Park piece!
Alan and Ellie reuniting, what can be better? Your doing a good job, so keep it up!
Although, one critisism I have to offer is that it may be moving a bit too fast. I know that we know the charcters already, but a little more development would be nice... and try to take things slow, it seems like I'm reading something in fast forward, but no worries! just keep working on it! :)
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