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Not bad. The charachter development, like everybody says, was a bit sub par. But, that's kind of to be expected for a first episode, with charachters nobody has ever heard of. I liked the Sith guy, he was cool. But, I didn't like the Yoda impersonator (I forget his name). This was not the best of writng, but it was worth my time. And I enjoyed it, most of the time.
Also, what did Soran mean, when he said, "You'd think this was Star Wars."?
I was under the impression, that it was Star Wars.
-- JPJunkee
At 10:07:25 PM on 6/24/2002, VelociraptorChick said:
hey sethy!!! Nice work...um, again for the last 100th time. haha. I am running out of compliments about your writing, so we'll be original. Nice work and keep it up!
*VC*
At 3:18:04 PM on 6/18/2002, yvonne said:
Seth, I was very entertained reading this story. As for character development, I'm sure there's more to come in future episodes. I think you did a good job introducing all of the characters though. And I especially like the Jedi names, Soran Darr and Raven Darkham. I have no clue why, I just do. lol. Good job! :)
At 10:10:53 AM on 6/18/2002, MAD-REX said:
Great job Seth, can't wait for the sequels! And this is a great comeback story!
MAD-REX
At 1:12:41 AM on 6/18/2002, Rick Arnold said:
It was a good story, I think Episode II will be better. The only things I didn't like, I'd have to agree with NVO on. And it could use some character development, but an overall fun read.
Rating: A
At 12:44:11 AM on 6/18/2002, Spino_38 said:
I thought it was awesome. Character development will come in more stories. Great job Seth, can't wait for the sequels!
At 11:25:02 PM on 6/17/2002, Nick Van Owen said:
<font color=grey>Good but not great. I agree with the character development. I didn't have any feeling towards the characters. And some scenes and characters from the movie but altered (names) bugged me. I feel you are capable of more original stuff. It also jumped from place to place too quickly.
<i>“ You’d think this was Star Wars,” Soran told himself.</i> I didn't understand this?
Death sticks are drink enhancers.
Parsecs are distances in space.
The only suggestions I have for EP 2 is improve on the above.
6/10
At 9:10:18 PM on 6/17/2002, Justisaur2 said:
Thats a good Star Wars fan fic. I enjoyed reading it. Descriptive word choice. I must agree there was little character developement but it dont matter its still a very good fan fic.
At 5:47:49 PM on 6/17/2002, Jedi A. Malcolm said:
Pretty cool, and a great read. Hope Episode II follows in it's footsteps.
At 5:38:42 PM on 6/17/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Fairly good read.....some pretty nice dialogue, no character development tho. Story got choppy and confusing but I did enjoy it :)
CARNARATING
6/10
At 5:28:49 PM on 6/17/2002, Seth Rex 2 said:
Tell me what you want in Episode II!!! email me suggestions to SethRex2001@aol.com
subject heading "EP 2 suggestions" and thanks for reading STAR WARS: EPISODE I- THE CHOSEN FORCE
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