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Nice story, well written.
I am not keen on the screen play genre but credit where credit's due.
What I don't understand was the purpose of the zombie? It seemed to have np bearing on the rest of the story that was, otherwise, well structured. Perhaps one of the teens torn to pieces but acting wild and rabid would have made more sense.
Also Iget that this is set in a small rural area, a one cop town, but there seemed to be a severe lack of protocol when dealing with what on the surface, would be a potential murder scene.
Otherwise, very engaging and atmospheric.
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