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means the user is online now! At 5:45:18 PM on 1/8/2002, Vito Hardy said: hmmm well now i know some more about the two kids, but you could've had grant and malcolm have a conversation with lex and tim to make your story longer. it would've helped also to describe some things that accured over the three days that the people were waiting for hammond's meeting. otherwise you're doing better. i have good hopes for this story man. good luck on future chapters.
At 4:45:38 PM on 1/8/2002, Rexjaws said: No they are just students from college. Eric McConvey and Johnathon Adam, not Billy Brennan.
At 4:43:28 PM on 1/8/2002, Kevin James said: Now are these kids Grants Kids?
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