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means the user is online now! At 12:16:17 AM on 1/12/2002, Vito Hardy said: Man you really should work on your dialoge parts and grammer. you are doing better on your explaining but the dialoge is missing and grammer is not that great. i still like this story. just work more on those two items.
At 9:50:04 PM on 1/11/2002, Rexjaws said: *sniffs* No comments for this Part? Why?
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