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means the user is online now! At 5:34:00 PM on 1/11/2002, Rexjaws said: OK! But the reason they are short is because you said to slow down a bit so I slow down by making it short, I explained this already. I will try as much to extend the chapters.
At 2:40:58 PM on 1/11/2002, Vito Hardy said: Alan is right. you should also work on your grammer man. otherwise the plot is good you just need some longer stuff.
At 2:02:40 AM on 1/11/2002, AlanGrant5 said: Rex, I think you should extend the length of your chapters because they are REALLY short! I told you I would help you... make sure to elaborate and create good descriptions. Good, but way too short to even be considered a part.
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