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means the user is online now! At 4:07:47 PM on 1/8/2002, Rexjaws said: I will keep working on this story and the character develoment on each character, part two was too short because I'm trying as much to slow down a bit, don't worry I will work on the character develoment. Just keep commenting!
At 5:36:40 PM on 1/7/2002, Vito Hardy said: I don't mean to sound rude man and i'm sure you're trying your best but you need to work more on character development. i like this story man it just needs more character development to work out. i still no nothing about this johnathan character and grant and malcolm doesn't seem to be grant and malcolm. otherwise you're doing good with your plot but work more on your character development.
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