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when the hell are you going to write ascreenplay for a horror movie. seriously this could be a MOVIE. i would see it. and the way you describe her, she could probably get like 50 bathtubs of blood from guys in a day. "oh, come to my house, we can fuck" *guy walks in* where are y..GAHHH IM DYING! "yes i would think so" but, why! "i need your blood to remain perfect."
At 12:00:00 AM on 8/28/2002, yvonne said:
You have left me speechless again. lol
I sat there at the computer for a few minutes with nothing to say. You have a slightly comical and very disturbing imagination ... and I love it. :)
I can't believe you spent so little time on it.
At 12:00:00 AM on 8/27/2002, The Host said:
A few grammatical quibbles and awkward wording here and there in the first few paragraphs of the story aside, this was a brilliant snapshot. Really disturbing. Few stories have ever actually churned my stomach; this one did. You have a fertile (if demented) imagination, and if you can someday stretch some of your ideas out into the form of novels, novellas, or (longer) short stories, while maintaining the quality scrunched into your briefer work, you could become a truly brilliant author.
-The Host
At 12:00:00 AM on 8/27/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Disturbing... crazed, and eerie, like most of your work. I marvel at the way you are able to come up with these random ideas and form a story out of them. Having spent five minutes on this particular fan-fic, it is decent work. :)
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