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means the user is online now! At 9:26:45 PM on 6/15/2002, Panos said: some grammer and spelling mistakes. The story was too short and was rushed. But was okay. I give it a 6/10.
At 8:35:10 PM on 6/9/2002, PolarShore said: thanks, yes i was going to extend it for a movie that im doing with the same story/title. This was just something i did for an assignment in english, we had to write a fictional short story and this was mine
At 5:39:48 AM on 6/9/2002, dark hunter said: Very nice, though a bit rushed, have you ever thought of writing this into an actual longer novel? with things happening not quite as fast? The character of Briggs was awesome. I really liked it.
Very Nicely done, though a tad fast
~Dark Hunter
At 5:46:58 PM on 6/8/2002, Spino Will Die said: ummm...... Not bad, nice ending "welcome to jurassic park"
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